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You eat the sky, violently,
stabbing me with your saving dagger.
I believe too!
Stop hitting me!

Mother always said to stand up,
but i fell down years ago.
You kicked me while I lay there,
I told her I tried.

I said the "Godless" love too,
they just do not know.
So sue them,
but I believe, I promise.

What separates me from you?
I finally understand.
I was the open door;
you tried to close it.

I tried to be the candle.
you snuffed me with your
indifferent, apathetic tears.
Why don't you listen?

If I could go back and
change my thoughts,
I wouldnt. I just wish that
I could make you listen.
I kinda stole the tite from a line in a movie preview. I'm not sure if this is very good, but it's what I was feeling in a particular point in time. It's definitely about something, but you can interpret it differently if you wish.
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TheShowerScene Feb 22, 2005   Writer
oo nice

i see some religous questioning perhaps?
but then again you say you believe so i could be wrong
dont listen to me i dont know what im talking about
but theres some religous stuff going on defiantly
:)
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:icondiam0nd-n-the-ruff:
yeah its all about religion.
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:icongreat-gallows:
X_x *diesof tehgoodnessofthepoem*
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:icondiam0nd-n-the-ruff:
thank you so much for the comment and the fav
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:icontheleprechaunbandit:
I LIKE THIIISSSS!!!

...PLus i saw "Constantine" last night. Damn it was good.

Now Im all paranoid that I'm going to hell....i dun wanna. T-T

bUT THE poem kicks ass!! i dunno if im perceiving it right, but theway i am its delicious.
Keep on truckin.
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:icondiam0nd-n-the-ruff:
thanks i think you are percieving it right. its about me being a christian or whatever but everyone is saying im a bad christian cuz i dont believe that nonbelievers are going to hell
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:icontheleprechaunbandit:
n_n
You're not a bad christian. =)
and we thank you for your non-dondmning ways. :hug:
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:iconagent-pocky:
That\'s absolutely gorgeous. :) Good work.
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